Wa'zaru - Ryn - Shadow/Sentry

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Wa'zaru - Ryn - Shadow/Sentry

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Post by ThreeBFour » Thu Apr 05, 2018 2:40 am

Name ... Waz’aru
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Species ... Ryn
Career ... Sentinel
Specialization ... Shadow/Sentry (20pts)
Morality... Independence/Alienation
Motivation ... Quest (Sith) Waz'aru still has the occasional nightmares from the night his family was slaughtered over 7 years ago by the red and black painted man, taking the small inscribed stone he had discovered weeks before. He is looking for answers to the mystery of the Sith.

Characteristics … (90pts) Br 2, Ag 3, Int 3, Cun 3, Will 2, Pres 2
Derived Attributes...Soak Value 3 (2+1), Wounds 14 (12+2), Strain 13 (12+1), Defenses 0/0,

Skills ... (10pts) Education 1, Lightsaber 1, Perception 1, Skullduggery 2, Stealth 2, Streetwise 1,
(Racial +1R Streetwise)

Talents ... (50pts) Conditioned 1, Grit 1, Indistinguishable 1, Sleight of Mind 1, Street Smarts 1, Toughened 1, Uncanny Reactions 1, Well Rounded

Force Powers …
Farsight: Basic Power, Control (Fine Details), Control (Transparent)
Misdirect: Basic Power, Range 1

Experience Points ... 200 spent, 0 unspent
Attributes (90) + Skills (10) + Talents (50) + Specializations (20) + Force Powers (30)

Credits ... 0 cr
Equipment …
Armor…
Heavy Clothes

Weapons…
Basic Lightsaber


Gear ...

High Quality Musical Instrument (Dorenian Beshniquel / Fizz)
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Background…

Waz'aru was almost too old to be taken on by the Jedi. He was 8 when he had found the stone. It had a strange script engraved all over and had a faint glow when the lights were off. A couple of weeks later his parents and extended family were slaughtered by an unknown human whose skin was painted red and black. Waz'aru was hiding up in the rafters of the house but knowing that he was going to be the next to die. The red and black man looked directly at him with a malevolent look in his eyes and then the rafter cracked and broke beneath him.
Waz'aru awoke to find himself in a bed belonging to the Ryn family nextdoor. There were two others in the room with him a Caamasi and a large Anx. Both questioned him quietly about the "Sith" as they called him and then the stone. When they were through the Anx, who had introduced himself as Jedi Master Maruli, offered to take Waz'aru with him back to Coruscant for training.
Waz'aru had started unknowingly his own training much earlier finding things that others couldn't see or even causing friends to look elsewhere when playing hide-n-seek. Somehow Master Maruli had sensed this in him and started explaining the Force to him on their trip back to Coruscant. Master Maruli thought that Waz'aru would make an excellent hunter of the Sith and it seemed was well on his way to becoming what was known among the Jedi as a Shadow. The Jedi Council agreed with him, but on the condition that Waz'aru also start training as a Sentry, looking to offset several of the negative traits they saw within the young Ryn.
Now 7 years later Waz'aru continues his training in both disciplines under Master Maruli, who allows and even encourages him to engage in his quest for answers about the Sith. Because whom Waz'aru still has nightmares about from that night 7 years ago.
Another thing Master Maruli has encouraged is the Ryn tradition of music. Master Maruli is a musician himself, playing multiple instruments, making sure that Waz'aru received a high quality Dorenian Beshniquel, also known as a Fizz from the Temple's more than ample selection of insturments and artifacts.
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Re: Wa'zaru - Ryn - Shadow/Sentry

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Post by ThreeBFour » Thu Apr 05, 2018 2:41 am

Working out background and how morality and motivation work into it.

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Re: Wa'zaru - Ryn - Shadow/Sentry

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Post by Doctor Who » Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:25 pm

At first glance it looks fine, but if you could clean it up a little that'd be awesome.
Give me about 5 minutes after a post, I'll probably edit it a bit before it is finalized.

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Re: Wa'zaru - Ryn - Shadow/Sentry

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Post by ThreeBFour » Fri Apr 06, 2018 1:25 am

Doctor Who wrote:
Thu Apr 05, 2018 11:25 pm
At first glance it looks fine, but if you could clean it up a little that'd be awesome.
Still working out my background, but I think I've got the main part done. Open to suggestions.

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Post by Doctor Who » Fri Apr 06, 2018 8:22 pm

Really anything is fine. You're just not that old, so don't fit too much into it.
Give me about 5 minutes after a post, I'll probably edit it a bit before it is finalized.

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Post by ThreeBFour » Sat Apr 07, 2018 9:33 pm

Okay background is up, let me known about changes you'd like. Also slight change to the name, just moved the apostrophe, liked it better.

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Post by ThreeBFour » Sun Apr 08, 2018 1:52 am

It's difficult to find a Ryn picture, so I settled on Droma from the NJO series.

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Post by Doctor Who » Sun Apr 08, 2018 3:03 am

Hmm, on the Sith thing, it'd probably be better if other Jedi didn't necessarily know about it until Wa'zaru said something, and even then they wouldn't be sure if what the kid said was ture. This is an era before Revan and Exar Kun brought the Sith back, and quite a while before Vitiate's Sith began openly doing things, so the Jedi were pretty sure that they had done a good job of getting rid of the Sith nearly 1000 years before.
Give me about 5 minutes after a post, I'll probably edit it a bit before it is finalized.

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Post by ThreeBFour » Sun Apr 08, 2018 11:43 am

I was planning on him being a little more secretive than most anyway. His previous Jedi Master could quite have easily told him to keep silent about the Sith. It can be a secret motivation, with Waz'aru occasionally asking questions when the Sith are brought up in conversation. Do you want me to change it? Or should I maybe add a secondary motivation?

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Post by Doctor Who » Sun Apr 08, 2018 6:58 pm

No, that's fine as a motivation, and if it is generally secret that's fine.
Give me about 5 minutes after a post, I'll probably edit it a bit before it is finalized.

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Post by ThreeBFour » Sun Apr 08, 2018 9:17 pm

I think I'm done with him for now, unless anyone else can think of something.

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Re: Wa'zaru - Ryn - Shadow/Sentry

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Post by Doctor Who » Mon Apr 09, 2018 8:04 pm

Looks fine to me.
Give me about 5 minutes after a post, I'll probably edit it a bit before it is finalized.

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